It's awfully funny :)). The image quality is not great: I think there's grain in the background that's not intentional, which neatimage would fix very nicely, and the lighting is a little flattish.
But just for the humor, I'll give this a 9 :)
Not a bad composition, but... You used the flash on the camera didn't you... You would be much better off putting the camera on tripod (best) or another secure solid surface and using existing light. This is very flat and harsly lit. The depth is all washed out by the proximity of the flash with the lens...
TC