2nd pass and this merits a higher score. The photo is riveting and well composed. B & W makes this shot as well as the casual demand to look at something much less appealing than what is front and center... it's a 10 to me.
the pinballs seem very much incidental to this picture. you have the eyes of your subject almost dead center, which draw much more attention than the pinballs in her hand. also, the balls are way close to the edge of the frame, kind of in tension with the edge. space on the upper left seems very dead.
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