This shot is very yellow. This leads me to belive that your white balance is wrong. Did you shoot this under regular lighting (incandescent light bulbs)? If so, you need to adjust your cameras settings to reflect this. Your gold tone border might work with the shot IF the white balance was correct. In this example though, your border accentuates the yellowness of the shot and contributes to the issue. Compositionally the shot is not bad, but the subject material isn't such to hold interest for long...
TC
This is golden light for golden watches, but the tones don't shine at all, they're very restricted. The leftmost feels like it's dropping out of image, due to it's position, size and twisted form. Besides, it's just getting to the three.