While this does tell the story of old and new, I think you could have been more creative in your approach and compositon. The compositon is very flat and uninteresting, no offense intended.
The old camera may be a Voigtlander Bessa with a Compur shutter. Very similar to my shot with a Voigtlander Vag (with a Voigtlander shutter) and a Nikon. Our two cameras look very similar.