Good shot, I think Azrifel hit the nail on the head, I would also like to see this shot in black and white with a little bit more negaitve space on the left.
The huge lump of body below the face looks a bit strange. Is it her shoulder or her knee? Especially since it has a distinctive darker skintone as her face. It makes the whole composition look a bit strange.
I like the light on her face, the power of and the light in her eyes.
wow, most excellent portrait work! you have quite a capture here. this is most captivating, and i hope it is getting the attention it deserves, and not getting lost in this huge challenge. good luck here, and in the challenges yet to come!
A lovely model and nicely posed. I am somewhat puzzled by the filter you used as there seems to be a grainy appearance around the lips and eyes and the hair. Maybe a little oversaturated. Her blue eyes are awesome. from about 6 feet away the picture appears flawless but up close the grainy appearance takes away from the overall technical beauty of the picture. I still like it though.
The model is breathtaking. The framing is A+. Two things that bother me: 1) the shoulder seems almost as big as the face. For this reason, I think I'd like it cropped square from the top, still showing the shoulder and the peeking over it, but less so. 2) The skin around the mouth and eyes has some strange artifacting. It's present in the hair too, but not distracting there. I'm not sure hwat it is or how to fix it. Despite these items, great shot. 8
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