Good lines that hightlight the patterns here. B/W is also a good choice. It's a little washed at the edges, though I like the darker center. Unappealing sky: it's just a void. Try waiting for an interesting sky or try to minimize it in the photo.
It's an okay photograph, but I find that the buildings on the other side distract from the bridge, and halfway across the water, the bridge seems to be out of focus.
The quality of the picture is really bad. Everything is blurry and washed out. Looks like you scanned a really old picture with a $20 scanner. I love the perspective of the shot however but the pic quality isn't there. :(
It looks like you've tried to create and old looking photo - which you have done fairly well. The shadows make it look like the shot was taken around midday - I would have tried for a different time of day personally.