ok, after a week and a half of voting, i can only imagine what the comments you've gotten are like, so i won't pile on. just don't take it too heart or personally. from the looks of things, though, you should wind up doing well here at dpc. you've got a decent camera, decent processing software, and an eye for turning more than snapshots. hang in there, and you'll get where you want to be!
Image is too small. You should take advantage of the full 640 pixels (length or width). Your subject is obscure: I can't tell whether it is a sheet, pile of sand or a part of a sculpture.
Not really sure what you were trying to accomplish here...Seems like a lot is going on, almost confused. Focus appears off. The fact that the size of this image is so small, your score will be affected. Sorry...Good luck.