Challenge:Leading Lines (Classic Editing) Camera:Olympus E-20 Location: Virginia Date: Feb 24, 2003 Aperture: f 8 ISO: 80 Shutter: 1/160 Date Uploaded: Mar 2, 2003
Challenge: Meets the challenge, but the line is a little detracting, like it ends before it reaches the barn. It's a great landscape picture!
Technique: I can see you went to the end of the line which was good, but I think if you would have crouched down and focused on the line instead of the barn, it would have been more impactful, while giving more attention to the line. I would be curious how this picture looks in a sepia tone. I think the colors, etc would make some great sepia hues.
Overall: A great job, and you followed the challenge rules well. There is a little noise to clear up, but that's easy to do "post-challenge". I would be curious how this would look at a lower angle.
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This is a nice all around photo but I think the foreground is too heavy. There's a spot in the center foreground which I would cut and everything below it! Although this would be about 1/3 of your image lost, you would still maintain your lines.
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