Better lighting would have done a lot for this. Itsblown out at the bottom, and the man's head disappears into darkness at the top. Their faces, being at the top are very dark and don't lend any impact.
what an interesting idea for wedding photography! hope you're getting some good comments and suggestions, and this you're not getting overlooked in this monster challenge. good luck!
I have to wonder whether you intentionally blew out the brides' dress or not... if so I'm not sure I would agree... it looks lik there is a lot of beautiful details that one would want to see. I love the smoke here, it's certainly "dreamy" what bothers me is the fact that the bride looks like her eyes are closed, and possibly the groom does as well? they look like they should be gazing into each other's eyes, but not quite... I wouldn't mind her eyes being closed, if she maybe had her head on his shoulder it would have worked. Nice photo though.
The mist adds a nice touch here and the black and white treatment is effective. Certainly beats the heck out of a lot of wedding photos you see around the place.
imo i think the faces are a bit dark for this type of photo, now it seems the focus of the picture is the brides white dress because that pops out from the black immediately, a slight selective dodge in ps might help bring out the faces more.
Beautiful moment. However the eye is drawn to the brightness of her lower dress. Maybe a little dodge and burn to bring out the faces and bring down the brightness of the dress.
Very well done. The couple looks very happy. I don't care for the fog, but it does blend with the title and is probably what you were going for. I gave this a 9.
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