Now, I do think this could have been straightened! Other than that I really can't say that it grabs me much, although the interest of the train is nice. Highlights are blown and I don't think there's much to grab me here.
Nice shoe. I like the contrast between the train motion and the stillness of the rest of the shot. The reflection at the top and middle of your shoe is a bit distracting, I guess primarily due to it seeming to fight with the lights just beyond your toes.
a wonderful concept, and i like that it's greyscale, but the execution could have been better, (but hey, you can hold up your own foot only so long/still, right?).