If you had somehow concentrated on the left half of this image (a great leading line), you would have a real winner. That wood structure that steals the show is (to me) totally devoid of interest. 6
Hey you have two leading lines here going into the main subject. Good idea! It is a touch too pyschodelic from the postprocessing for my liking but that is a matter of taste. You met the challenge and that is what counts.
The lines really don't lead to your subject, I don't think I would have even seen her, if it wasn't the title of the photo. IMHO the main part of this subject is the fence or benches whatever those are... the woman is so lost, because she is dark, and the fence is bright which automatically grabs your attention. I don't think this fits the challenge. Sorry.
The idea is a good one, but there are a couple things that distract me. The biggest thing is that the colors appear to be *way* oversaturated -- they're just too harsh and blown out. The other is that I would have preferred that the woman hadn't had her whole back amputated in the shot. Probably would have been stronger to have gotten her entirely within the frame.
This photo is a bit strange... I'm not sure if your intended subject is the bench or the dog on the leash... The post processing has washed out the leash quite a bit and i'm not sure if you intended that to be your leading line or not... - setzler
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