Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - The varying sizes and colors of eggs in this photo give it a little more creative variety. The smaller ones are definitely unique compared to most. Their arrangement in the box is good. I think that the framing could have been a little better to include more of the box and not concentrate on the eggs so much as the box. That might improve the framing. This picture isn't flat from a depth perception, but needs a little something to make it "dynamic" an you can make a still life. I'm not sure what happened to the one if front just left of center but that egg is a bit washed out so to speak. It may have just a little less pigment in it's shell.
Technical - Looks pretty sharp to me. The lighting is ok. I'd prefer a little more dramatic lighting to give the eggs some depth. I think the framing needs to be a panned back a little. If it is, I feel the background would have to change so it didn't get too busy. This photo is not badly taken, but could use a few adjustments.
Overall - Not a bad shot but not really a good one either. There really isn't to much to look at after first glance and seeing the sizes of the different eggs. It needs a few adjustments but is a good start to a pretty good photo. Good luck with future efforts. - Inspzil |
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