Greetings from the Critique Club
Congratulations on an interesting image, that has made excellent use of diagonals! I think that using black and white has made the image more moody and interesting! One can really feel the precariousness of the egg! I dont feel that the soft focus of the background detracts from this image, rather it adds to it! It makes me feel that Humpty is wobbling on the wall!
Well done.
Simple and effective. The lines of the stairs and 'wall' give the picture much interest. The inclusion of the wood(?) on the bottom left is a bit distracting, though not too much since it follows the lines of the stairs in the background. Good job!
Out of focus, but I still like the idea. If you are trying to communicate the precariousness of the egg, a higher perspective with some more interesting light levels and angles may be in order, too.
fun idea...interesting placement although it's very unusual and i keep trying to figure out what that is that the egg is sitting on. i like the way the steps look grainy.