Added a person to the scene to impart a dynamic element. The color chosen was red because of its impact symbolizing being in the red i.e. losing money. The hand and background where the person is walking into is red which thematically links the person to the credit card. It may be interpreted symbolically as someone headed to financial ruin because of the red coloring or as someone abandoning bad financial practice by leaving the scene. The letter tray was positioned to keep the eyes on the scissors and card. It also evens out the overall tone though I think they might be too big. Also the only tricky part to the lighting is goboing the credit card to eliminate reflection.
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OMG why did you put your credit card number on the internet!!! That being said, i like the use of DOF. The lighting seems a bit on the low side, but the composition and sharp focus makes up for it. The credit card owner walking out the door is a nice addition to the scene -- as if he just cut up his card and is done with it. Good work.
You're right the lighting is too low. I didn't notice it. After adjusting it looks better.
I really like the colors in this one. Not sure if I like the boarder or not. Would be just a little better if the handles were not cut off. I'm giving it a 9. See you at the top, good luck.
OMG why did you put your credit card number on the internet!!! That being said, i like the use of DOF. The lighting seems a bit on the low side, but the composition and sharp focus makes up for it. The credit card owner walking out the door is a nice addition to the scene -- as if he just cut up his card and is done with it. Good work.
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