Critique Club COmments by Grayce
This image meets the challenge with lines that lead directly to the subject. I like how the lines are under and above the bird, and echo each other.
The contrast is quite good and leaves no doubt as to the subject. The bird stands out nicely.
Unfortunately the eyes aren't visible. They are the most important aspect. Always try to focus on the eyes. IF the rest is a little fuzzy, so what! As long as you can see the eyes.
I'm sure you had to do this real quickly, before it flew away.
I like how the head is cocked. It shows expression and movement.
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Good luck in all your photographic endeavors!
Regards,
Grayce
Great candid shot, difficult to get a good clear shot of wildlife, which would be my main suggestion for improvement in this shot, and maybe a different crop so the bird wasn't so much in the center of the bottom of the photo.
I think the lines should have more of a play in the shot. My eye is drawn to the subject because of the color and dominance. The lines do not draw my eye to the subject. You did have a good idea here letting the lines work. Next `lines` challenge, let the lines take on a more active role in the shot. :) -Clicker-
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