CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
Though the horizontal placement of eggs gives the picture a solid, stable feeling, it also makes it kinda static. There is nothing to lead the eyes through the picture; they just go to the white egg and stop. I think a tighter crop to remove the white at the top and bottom, or to even it up would have been effective, or arranging the eggs differently, maybe in a cluster instead of rows.
TECHNIQUE
It seems slightly overblown on the white. Maybe a diffuser, or something like a tissue or paper towel (make sure it doesn't ignite!) over your primary light source would help.
OVERALL EFFECT
I think this is a potentially awesome shot. The white adn brown provides a neat contrast, and it does meet the challenge.
Best wishes in the future.
karmat
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