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What a lovely old house! Congratulations on seeing the potential of this old house and on seeing the other side of despair Hope!
Composition:Generally good but the house is tilted a little so it looks like it is tipping over.
Focus: A little soft, but not sobad that it spoils the image. It looks like you were shooting in very poor light.
To me the bright splash of the yellow daffodils is the Hope in your title.
Keep shooting You have a good eye and creative imagination The technicallities will come with practice.
this is a wonderful idea. I think I'd like to see the house straightened up within the frame though. it's leaning a bit to the left. looks like this was taken in poor lighting with flash. was this done on purpose, or just ran out of time. I wonder how this would have done in full light? focus seems ok. otherwise a nice shot. I really like the idea behind it. pretty flowers, old run down house. nice find. good luck in the challenge.
Why put a bright flower in a despair shot? The eye goes to that. The shot is crooked, poorly composed, and not exposed well. You might have concentrated on the run-down buikding and left the flowers out. This would have allowed you to focus the building and expose it properly. Hope I'm not too harsh.
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