From the Critique Club.
Simple images like this do not work on DPC. The image is flat, depth is a highly enhancing feature to a photgraph. The light from your flash is to powerful. The straight on look does not work either. The image does have a title that fits.
It could be inproved by changing the angle, try shooting tlaying on the ground looking up, or off to the side. As for the lighting I would recommend no flash. Try using a tripod for stability.
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