Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: Interesting image with a very interesting subject. I like the juxtaposition of expecting happiness and your capture of an emotion that doesn't seem happy. I think this one is a stretch to meet my idea of a shallow DOF challenge. I think most of the voters felt the same way.
My ideas for improvement: My biggest critique of the overall image is where the main area of focus landed. I think had you captured her face and eyes crisply, this one would have finished with a better score.
Where I would have/did score this entry: I did not vote in this challenge, but this one would have landed in the 5 area for me. With that in mind, I feel the score of the capture as presented is appropriate. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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