Oh dear....somebody's gonna be a little upset when they see this. Ouch. Anyway, it certainly is a great capture and the lighting and clarity is great as well. Good luck.
Looks like the roof was already collapsed, else the snow would have fallen off when it did...maybe not, doesn't matter. Too cluttered for an effective presentation, for me.
A very journalistic shot, in my view. Very busy, but the focus is clearly on the roof. the white at left adds some neutral space, which relieves the eye. For me, it says "snow collapsed roof" more than it does "despair."