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This had to take a lot of work! And it is nicely done. I voted 4 on it for the following reasons: Changing text from white to black depending on the background breaks the continuity when reading the words. I'm sure you know what all the items mean, but it is unclear to the viewer why there is a huge flower that is the primary object, a ghosted walker and dog, a bicycle rider with no ghosting, a feather growing out of his head, one isolated section of picket fence, what looks like "fixed but still visible" power lines above and to the right of the bicycle, and a drop-off portico. It becomes a mish-mash with no clear relationship between the elements or easily-understood message. |