What an unnerving smile! It is what makes the shot. The slight tilt bothers me, though. I am trying to figure out where the camera is. I'm guessing off to frame right and enough of a crop that... Oh wait. This isn't a mirror! Ok, extra pointage for confusing me and making me look harder at the details.
Such a great expression and the repeating shapes of the figures and the bottles. You really caught the moment.
Did you try cropping off the right side to a square? For me, that tightens it up gets rid of that distracting post strengthens the fore/aft layer of the bottles and the people and creates a Left/Right symmetry between the two figures that's broken by the guy on the right's great expression. A solid 8
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