Cool photo, I don't know if a selective desaturation would have helped to possibly focus the eye more on the island and help draw it out from the busy background.
Composition: 7, Technical: 6, Appeal: 4, Challenge: 2, Overall Score: 3 (weighted)
Sorry - the pic is ok, but I'm hard on "Broken Dreams" or "Broken Spirits" unless they are much more direct or literal.