oh no - hate it when that happens. perhaps less lighting on the hand would help improve this interesting shot... or if you're feeling daring, i have an inkling that a very shallow DOF that only keeps the cork in focus would work quite well here (if that's possible - i realize everything is at a relatively equal distance from the camera)
Composition: 6, not liking the angle
Technical: 9, Great lighting and focus
Appeal: 7, seems to be missing some motion or drama
Challenge: 8
Overall Score: 7 (weighted), Nice idea and pretty well done.