Returning for comments:
A very good study. Both can be fixed, only the window is easier. An image that is excellent because it is using a counter balance. Bumping up.
cropping is a little tight top and left. I'd like to see the full course of upended bricks above plus a little of the running course, and I'd want to have a little more space to the left of the window as well. Still, a sweet image.
Excellent composition. Tastefully and artistcally framed. Nice tonal range. Excellent exposure and detail. Stark duotone conveys the message and with great visual impact. Nicely done.