Hi John. Great picture. You did a good job at stopping the motions here. I can't seem to get a good photo of my kids moving around without it being blurry. Glad to see you submitting. Looks like you have a lot of fun down there.
Very nice shot. This is a good example I think of a candid, not set up shot that still manages to look professional and not like a snap shot. I would have liked her on the right side of the frame instead so the dress could sweep into the space behind her, but you caught it how you caught it and its fine. Th colors are nice and the image is crisp and clear. nice job. 7
She seems unnaturally slanted towards the right of the frame (I don't think it's due to her movement). It would also have been nice to see the whole of her skirt and the things she's holding since she's the subject of the photo. Very nice colour and clarity.
I think the white of the ground is a little too bright - perhaps overexposed. I think it's cropped perhaps a little too tightly - I prefer to see the edges of the person rather than them being just slightly cropped. This would include both hands and streamers, and to a lesser degree her dress. Other than that the photo is very nice.
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