good title. the photo is not so interesting and since it does not spark my interest I have no suggestions on how to do it better. On a technical note: you could try to set the WB on your camera to the paper (to effectively remove it - or at least that's what I think will happen) and a second lightsource to the L and Down to remove the darker L side. Good luck. /5 for meeting the challenge.
Nice composition...I would have liked to seen stronger lighting to really bring out the yellow on the paper. Seems a little dull under the lighting you have chosen.
There is a lot of good aspects to this shot - if I had to suggest one change it would be to have some text being highlighted since it is a highlighter. Maybe a famous quote or something - would tie it to the title. Ok, one more thing - a little sharper. Good job though.
i think this is a good idea and good composition i just think it lacks the good lighting to really bring out the yellow on the paper and eliminate the shadow which darkens this shot, also a highlighter is brighter on glossier paper which may help
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