Critique CLub Comments
Very effective image, that also meets the challenge right one! I love the simpicitiy of this composition. The diagonal line works beautifully and the use of negative space works well.
I like the yellow border, but I definetly agree that the yellow line from the marker should touch the border, and a little more space left at the bottom of the marker, would have made the image better.
As it is, it is still a wonderful picture. Good work! I like this very much.
Regards,
Lose the border, I think this works without it. At least connect the border with the line you drew with the highlighter to make it look like one line, if you have the opportunity.
Excellent! I personally would have started the boarder where the highlight picked up, creating the visual effect that the boarder was also highlighted.
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