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Congratulations on your first entry in DPC. I hope you will find this experience both fun and an opportunity to learn. Please accept my opinion as only that. There are many minds on this website who see things very differently so take the comments and criticisms only as an opportunity to grow and see how others perceive your work. Overall I like your composition. It is well arranged, colorful and satisfies all the elements of the challenge. I feel though that you have some unnecessary elements included which make the picture feel cluttered. I personally would like to see the background in better focus as they are also important in the composition. Finally, help to define your image with a title. It helps the viewer to understand your purpose. I look forward to seeing more of your entries:) |