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It's a nice portrait, but the composition seems awkward to me. There's a pole coming out of the top of her head. The roof above her and the side of the building really don't add much to the photo. I would have zoomed (or cropped) in quite a bit. The tips of her fingers around the pole look like they're not attached to anything. She has such a nice smile -- just move in so much closer to get the focus on her. |