Yes, a dump truck. a snapshot of a dumptruck. You need to go in closer and low - like th etruck is going to run me, the viewer over.
Technically, the undercarriage is too dark, draws my eye. the excavator in the left should be cropped out - it adds nothing, but does distract. The sky is dull - a polarizer filter would have helped, and cut the windshield glasre to nothing, letting the driver stand out more. |