I really like the right part of the image, up to the vertical line crossing her earring or across her shoulder. Especially in the face there is a nice transition from light to shadow that is still soft enough to match and emphasise the shape and softness of the face. But the too strong light from the left onto her back and shoulder and the shadow on top of her shoulder distorts that shape in that part of the image. It looks to be a bit strange bulb is you just isolate your view on that part. Cropping the image vertical across the shadow on top of her shoulder would have worked in my view. Still a good one in this challenge though.