in here I would have tried to keep the aperture such that the lemon and melon they bot come out in focus of look and have played around DOF keeping focus point at center placed in the second slide of melon to get the shot.
I like how you have two anagrams in a single picture. I also like the general composition, but I struggle with the choice of focus and the fact that it seems to be nowhere tack sharp.
Anagrams of one another; clever. To my eye the focus is on the farthest lemon slice and I prefer either more DOF or a focus on a foreground piece of fruit.
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