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My Sister
My Sister
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Challenge: Yellow Revisited (Basic Editing II)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 935
Location: My house
Date: Dec 1, 2004
Galleries: Family, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Dec 4, 2004

 My sister Emily

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Place: 198 out of 393
Avg (all users): 5.0250
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
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Views since voting: 762
Views during voting: 391
Votes: 280
Comments: 5
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Canon EOS-20D
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
 12/13/2004 09:45:53 PM
Returning for comment:
A great pose, smile and subject.Ii would have found the essential light to bring more definition into the eyes. However, the comp is just great. Bumping up.
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Canon EOS-20D
 12/12/2004 04:40:16 PM
a nice portrait.
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Olympus E-5
Olympus 50mm f/1.8 MF Normal Zuiko
 12/11/2004 08:02:54 PM
Is it all the yellow that makes her skin tone look so pink?
Nikon D200
Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 70-200mm f/2.8 VR DG IF-ED
 12/09/2004 04:01:46 PM
bringing her forward a little and using a shallower depth of field would soften the background a bit , taking out the wrinkles in the backdrop and diminishing the shadows a bit. a soft light from the lower left would brighten her face up some too so we could see her eyes (dodging the highlights in PS would have the same effect)

great smile, very nice crop and angle of her head. soft focus (i assume added after the fact) is very nice as well. overall a very nice portrait.

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Olympus E-5
Olympus 18-180mm f/3.5-6.3 Zuiko ED Digitial Zoom
 12/09/2004 10:14:55 AM
The yellow is almost blinding!! :) Very pretty model and a great expression! Good work 8
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