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I think it needs more work in terms of composition, viewing angle and especially lighting. It could be much more appetizing than this. With good light you could emphasise the texture of the bread, the colour of the wine, the shape of the apples, the shape of the glass etc. I would start with reduction of the number of elements, take a lower viewpoint and then experiment with different light sources. A single light source from the side to start with, and some reflectors to fill in shadows etc etc. |