Critique Club
Composition-Content
Now this is a picture which I think deserved to do much better! Your idea is very original and you executed it well. Composition is great, with the cheese lined up across the picture. It fits the challenge perfectly but in a unique and humourous way.
Background
Perhaps the background could be a bit darker, boosting the shadow channel would have created a darker background.
Technical
Lighting looks great, perhaps slightly brighter would have been good, this could have been adjusted in post processing. Focus looks a little soft, but your aperture is not the reason....? Perhaps a tiny bit more sharpening would have helped.
My Opinion
Great, original shot! I agree with the one comment that a different colour string would have helped it stand out against the background. Excellent shot which should have scored higher IMO! Good Luck in the next challenge.
This was in my top three. Not only was it yellow?unless I'm colorblind (which I am!)?it says something to me. Unlike the three winners, whose photos are good, this one said something beyond yellow. I still say bravo!
This photo is engaging and intriguing to me because of the patterns created and then upset at the left. The subtle shades of different yellows are also engaging. A subtle and well composed photo that says way more than "yellow." Nice work.
Funny idea! IMHO it could be better with a non black line. Perhaps white, or yellow too. The cheese slices are looking a little bit like hovering in the air :-)
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