I like this picture and the lighting however find my focus is drawn to your eye rather than the clothes pins pinching your cheek. Would have liked to seen the lighting focused moreso on the clothes pin and the humor element I believe you were going for. Nice shot
It seems that, while the photo and idea are great, it could have been cropped differently. E.g. if less of the left side of the face (viewer's right side) was showing, that would have improved the composition.(imho)