This is such a cool concept and timing. The bright oranges in the background are fighting for my attention with your subjects though. If you had a shorter depth of field to blur the background and then toned down the greens and oranges the subjects would pop more imo.
great find, but it was either not sharp to begin with or processed too much. I keep trying to focus better with my eyes. I think you could have gotten away with it if you had overexposed it and made it a bit soft and dreamy.