Greetings from the CC gang!
THEME: Yes the photo does have some rhthym but IMO adding a few more would've made a stronger impact. Maybe you didn't have any more. :-)
COMPOSITION: Having them with the same distance between them would create better rhythm as well. One is overlapping and is distracting to the eye. Remember that rhythm is all about symetry. Cropping is fine to me.
LIGHTING: It seems a bit underexposed. Maybe decreasing shutter speed or adding more light sources would've helped.
General feeling... unfortunately this shot doesn't have any WOW factor to me. It would not be a shot that I would print out and hang on my wall.
I hope this helps!
Yanik
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