Composition: One thing that I see right off the bat is that this shot is crooked. Also the light near the left side is pretty distracting. The yellow blue contrast is what really makes this shot.
Technical: This lighting of this photo is just fine. A tripod would have helped this shot dramatically by putting it in focus and you could have used a longer shutter speed letting the light streaks cross the whole shot.
Overall: This would have been a great shot if it wasn't so out of focus. I think thats the main reason why this scored so low.
I like the blur of the lights and the people--it shows that this is an active, engaging place. I kind of wish the bridge itself was in focus, though. Your colors and composition work well together.
This photo would have been a lot better without those people on the right there. They have been captured in a blur because of the slow shutter speed which in my opinion distracts my eyes too much. You have caught some great colors there though.
This would have been really good, but the camera shake really detracts. All of the stationary object should be sharp, but they're not. Use a tripod next time.