To me it seems a little too "tossed together"... a little too random, even though there are numerous clocks involved. The railing that runs vertically along the right hand side is also a bit distracting.
The exposure seems too dark (especially on the upper right hand clock) and needs more contrast. Your center clock, because it is asymetrical itself, seems to throw off the balance of the shot (which I think is vital to this shot). The door frame on the right side should have been avoided. It seems the shot is also tilted to the left. The idea had some potential but the shot needs a lot of technical work. Good luck. 3
I understand the 'rhythm' idea you were going for here, but the photograph doesn't really show the 'repeating pattern' idea... the contrast also seems to be just a bit weak... - setzler
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