I really like the idea on this one. And the vase works great oof. But having the focus point way off on the left isn't really working for me. It makes it look crowded and a bit uncomfortable in the crop. Once the crop is uncomfortable, you start looking around more and notice the thing in the upper right and perhaps another vase or something straight up above. If the focus point had been more of one of the central flowers (even if it was a smaller one, it would have kept my eye from roaming.
Seems like it could have been a 7-8 with small tweaks, but ended up as a 5 as is. |
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