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I'm not sure it's necessary to show the entirety of the tree to get your point across here; by doing that you've inevitably included a large amount of background, and that background isn't so strong - the clutter of leaves, trees, sky, grass just feels messy here, and doesn't add to your real point, surely? Also the rings are only really visible in one part of the tree - right beside those interestingly shaped cracks. I wonder that you haven't concentrated on just that area, filling the frame with tree would make it much more effective (much simpler, really). There's little sense of light here also - very blank and ordinary seeming. |