I like the reflection on the water. If you had cropped the photo so just the fountain was in the picture, it would have looked like abstract art somehow. I liked your version as well. Just a suggestion.
The water in this photo is not terribly attractive, nor is the tank in hthe background. But you know there is a park in my town that looks pretty similar. I remmeber it weel because when I was around ten or so my friends and I would ride bikes around that area, skipping stones across the dirty pond, fishing and generally doing the things that young kids like to do. Well thats just my memory of the place that looks similar to this picture. I give it a 5.
It should have been cropped a little more, trim out the bottom part up to the top tank (wich is the bottom in the reflection). Fountain water looks good. Should have been shot a differant time of day to avoid the sharp diagonal shadow on the right side of the tank. Still a really nice picture.