The splash is pretty cool, but the shot feels surprisingly static with the dead center subject and framing. Maybe a tighter crop, or different composition would bring out the action more.
That is a great capture of an old pasttime of mine. Heck, I still do it, although of course it just looks a lot more eccentric. May there always be puddles to be splashed in and dignitaries to be indignant. (10)
I think this image would work so well in a vertical format to cut down on distractions. This is a classic "decisive moment" shot. Well executed - I just suggest reconsidering your crop.
Nice stop action, this is a great photo expression what kids love to do. The photo may have benefitted from a tighter crop on the subject since there is nothing of interest or import in the background.
Awesome timing of the shot. It seems a bit flat, but I'm not good enough at B&W to make a helpful suggestion, and I am sorry for that. I think your crop (complete with the tree coming from the model's back) is pretty decent. It gives a sense space, and spontaneity (sp?) Good luck.
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