Voted earlier coming back to comment.
The words on the playbook appear to spell out the word listen. This photo of this young musician practicing invites the viewer to stay a while and listen. I can see her concentration as she plays. You have a solid foundation but I think the composition could be stronger if it is cropped closer - bring us closer to the music and musician. Crop closer so that the girl playing her instrument fills 90% of the screen and you draw the viewer in more readily. |