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this could use a bit more focus.
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i dont know if this is out of focus on purpose.. but it doesnt work for me
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This feels like a yearbook photo. Take more of a risk with her.
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The soft focus just makes it seem out of focus :(
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Too unfocused for my tastes.
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The photo looks out of focus... i tried to see if it was a soft focus effect, but no it does seem to be out of focus
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Maybe you are going for a soft look, but I'd like a sharper focus.
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Seems a bit out of focus.
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this is out of focus, it seems that she is moving
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a bit blury maybe try changing you iso
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Too soft. Pretty face though!
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You have some nice lighting on the face and the catchlights look good in her eyes, but the image is too fuzzy. I'm not sure if this was camera movement or an attempt at soft focus, but I think it takes away from an otherwise good photo.
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Appears to be out of focus (maybe that's intentional?)
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Nice subject and pose. She certainly is lovely :)
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wayyyy out of focus.In portraits, especially close up portraits like this one, the eyes HAVE to be in focus and sharp.
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Focus is just a bit too soft, imo.
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focus needs to be sharper I'm afraid - try focussing on the eyes - the most important part of any portrait.
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I never have liked soft focus shots.
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This seems OOF to me. Also there is something just over her right shoulder in the photo that distracts.
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focus seems a bit off to me
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I gave it a better vote thatn it deserves due to the poor quality, but I do like the title, and she looks so real.
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