YOU are my hero.
This is my favorite of this challenge, and i hope you do well.
I think it could have been a little darker, and too bad about the reflection in her head (i see you!)
Very interesting composition. Maybe some grain, blur or less contrast would add to the urgent night scene? 8, based mostly on compostion and cropping. This would make a good wall poster indeed :)
you went through a lot of work to do this! The whole scene is very nice, the look in her eyes is perfectly for a hero, but there are too a few things that are a pity: the reflection of the blue sky in the hood (doesn't add up with the water..or is it supposed to be a waterfall? I don't have enough information for that) and her mouth looks a bit odd..
All in all: nice job!