The skin hghtlights are blown out and there is no detail in the dark areas - too much contrast adjustment perhaps? Also, the hair in the face is a distraction. I think the crop is awkward too - the area on the left doesn't add anything to the "feel" of the photo, so in this case, the rule of thirds doesn't work.
this is an awesome shot, i think the title doesnt really go with it, it makes me think of many other things other than innocense, but it is your shot..so who am i to say
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