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Composition-Content
Really great idea and composition, the person seems to be "hiding" in a good place as far as rule of thirds, but perhaps it is a little obvious, maybe if he could have been hidden a bit more...
Technical
Great focus, overall good quality. i think that the lighting is a little harsh, the details of the golf balls have been lost, perhaps toning it down a bit would have been good. However the overall lighting is even. The main thing about this shot, is the border, just too bright! I know that you had lots of comments about it, I don't think you lose points over it, but a simple black border, with perhaps a tiny yellow one inside would have been good.
My Opinion
I think that your composition and idea are great, it is eye-catching and original. Personally, I am not a golf fan, so it doesn't really appeal to me but it is colourful and meets the challenge well. Good Luck in the next challenge.
+ Great concept & composition
- the highlights wash out the detail of the golf balls, the border has to go, focus is soft overall
Could have been an 8 or 9, but with the flaws 6
Golf nut! Very colorful image. Glare is a tad bright on the whiter balls, but overall this is a well done shot. (Gotten any complaints about your yellow border?) Good focus, framing works. Challenge well met. 8 Swash
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